tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4359713856816206512.post5730028131699003478..comments2023-05-07T00:48:54.638-07:00Comments on Incongruous Circumspection: First Bedtime Story Response - The Kids Were Marginally ImpressedIncongruous Circumspectionhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16232186225573312896noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4359713856816206512.post-31575073868018618432013-11-17T17:23:39.569-08:002013-11-17T17:23:39.569-08:00Cute story, but I have to put on my editor hat her...Cute story, but I have to put on my editor hat here and ask what was the old man laying? Eggs? "To lie" means to recline. "To lay" means to put or to place. <br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4359713856816206512.post-68032773775091395292013-11-11T15:21:03.610-08:002013-11-11T15:21:03.610-08:00He was very lightweight.He was very lightweight.Incongruous Circumspectionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16232186225573312896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4359713856816206512.post-50710491824729364422013-11-11T15:16:46.256-08:002013-11-11T15:16:46.256-08:00I'm confused by one thing: You said there were...I'm confused by one thing: You said there were no footprints in the dirt, but the boy was wearing shoes too large for him that were falling apart... shouldn't there be tracks?Candynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4359713856816206512.post-58793438691132548672013-11-10T20:15:42.231-08:002013-11-10T20:15:42.231-08:00I agree with your editor... For the most part.I agree with your editor... For the most part.Elliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12087919248114866762noreply@blogger.com